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crow May 8, 2020 9:10 pm

the beginning looked really good.
the introduction of the childhood friend not believing in him looked good, but it looks like he's going to make up with her later. lame.
I also don't understand... so this young girl is in his class? I understand she is strong but she seems far to weak to be in the same class. I hate when they introduce characters that aren't actually competent. He shouldn't have to take care of her.
also he shouldn't be shipped with ANYONE at this point. the childhood friend or the young girl.
and, this story is becoming increasingly hard to follow. They introduce way to many people, don't make them memorable, and then make them important. stories like these often have the "i hate commoners!" and then that's it. that's their entire character explained. it's disgusting.
At least in "A Returners Magic Should Be Special" one of the young nobles hates commoners for seemingly no reason at the beginning, but then shows that both his parents were killed in a commoner uprising (after they were subjected to unfair treatment) but in his eyes, they were just gross commoner rats that killed his parents. He has a reason.

anyways, this looked good. but somewhere along the line it gets confusing, and i wish i got to see when the main character learned all this and got more powerful. he seems to be 'naturally' gifted but that doesn't explain everything else. I hope it gets cleared up, or i will probably never read this again.

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