One of the worst planned plots

mountainecho May 14, 2020 11:47 pm

Obey Me is recommended for fans of Killing Stalking just because they both have kidnapping themes, but you can tell Killing Stalking is incredibly well planned and well executed.

Obey Me on the other hand.....where to begin it’s an attempted kidnap romance story but none of the characters go through any development, it’s full of plot holes (two memory losses? One is cliche enough, you just had to throw in two) and feels like empty smut in between some story scenes. If you want to fill time read ahead, but I wouldn’t say Obey Me is worth reading or will leave a lasting impression by any means (apart from the impression of wtf did I just waste my time reading)

Maybe I’m being too harsh, if the story had about 40 chapters it could have potential who knows

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