yes! I do agree with all of your comments.
1. but i also really enjoyed the first couple. of course, preference and personal opinions play a role in it but overall, I thought that what WOULD have helped is diving a little more into the semes past, and they didn't. if we got a little more background on past relationships i think it would be more obvious how scared he became of looking Jisuh. I think that it could have been done slower to show the progression more, but at the same time it is a... lose lose situation? if someone was reading this with a slower pace, they may say it was too long and drawn out when it could have been done in a couple chapters. I think the background on Heejae would have also made us more... understanding? of why he looked into Jisuh's past. I appreciated that he was putting forth the effort to change his ways, and Jisuh actually LEFT HIM in the first place. Not saying that everything about them is perfect, but i did love them.
2. i agree. although i like that it was obvious that Jisuh was done with him. I thought it was rather realistic for him to reach his breaking point and just decide he was completely done. Jisuh, in my opinion, had his closer and his ex just couldn't accept that.
3. actually, I liked it a little bit but personally I didn't think it suited his personality at all. When he said payback I was like yes! stand up for yourself! but when I realized he planned to completely leave him I think that Jisuh would have regretted how damaged he made Heejae. He didn't realize how closed off he Heejae was, and how much he had opened up to Jisuh. So when they made up, I was glad. I also liked that when they were fighting and broke up, Jisuh said something like "Thanks for making me realize I'm not someone for revenge." because I personally related a lot with Jisuh, and I felt it was out of character for him. But for him to realize he couldn't do it seemed very in character. In the end he just walked away, and I liked it.
4. YES. HE WAS MY BABY. I also thought his feelings came a little out of nowhere but I didn't hate it. I thought it would be weird if they got together though, and in the end I liked where it all ended. Not going to lie, personally I was rooting for them to all have sex in the same room. All four of them. I thought it would be incredible, but I'm not mad they didn't either.
5. I thought it was alright. I, personally, don't like the bigger one as the bottom very much. I did, however, really like it in this story and it had a lot to do with Sunyool's personality. Often in stories like this the smaller seme seems almost twisted when they have sex, (not always but many stories) and it always made me feel uncomfortable. But I think that overall they implied that they are still a switch, and probably did many other things in the future. I LOVED THEM.
I'm sorry for replying back with such a long message, I just love analyzing things and couldn't resist adding my thoughts into your comment.
This ended up being a pretty good read! The overall plot was nice and I enjoyed reading this a lot though I feel like the story progression could've been handled way better aaaa. Here are some thoughts:
1. For some reason I just couldn't like the main couple as much as I think I should? Didn't like how Jisuh just went along with Heejae even when knowing that he looked into his background. Then it turns out he never just thought about it until they started having feelings for each other?? It felt weird idk,, also the way how heejae changed from the manipulative type to a simp in just a few chaps felt off I never grew to like his character
2. I don't like how the old ex appeared and disappeared just like that. Its like, he was put there for the sake of the plot to move? The 'closure' between him and Jisuh was really unsatisfying
3. The way I was hyped when Jisuh was planning to get revenge omg I was all "wow this story took an interesting turn I LOVE THIS" ,,, only to end up with him forgiving Heejae at the end;; I mean I get it he grew feelings for the guy but then what was the point of the whole revenge thing then? It made me have expectations that just led to disappointment sighhh
4. I LOVE SUNYOOL!! Ngl, I didn't like him at first and his feelings for Jisuh came outta nowhere tbh,, But I ended up liking his character the most. I was really rooting for him and hoped he would win in the end T_T I loved his character development. I also loved how he was a switch,,, which leads me to #5
5. I loved the second couple better but i was a bit disappointed to see Sunyool still ending up as the bottom with Haeyoung :( I was really enjoying seeing him as the top and Haeyoung who had the bigger built as the bottom sighh (but the smut was still good though!)