The story has a nice concept and I bet this would be a hit once the art style improves. The lines are a bit shaky. With better equipment, I bet the author would make lots of good stories. This isn't bad for a first story either. (Just a constructive comment.)
The story has a nice concept and I bet this would be a hit once the art style improves.
The lines are a bit shaky. With better equipment, I bet the author would make lots of good stories.
This isn't bad for a first story either.
(Just a constructive comment.)