A couple things...

Sushi July 1, 2020 7:19 pm

This story literally could have been over in a chapter if shion had just gone to the convenience store and stolen something (lol)

Also, ending didn't make sense... Shion didn't actually sin because ibuki technically stabbed himself.

ALSOOO why do they keep having sex throughout the story??? It obviously didn't work the first time, try something different, guys!

It was a great story tho, I enjoyed it

Responses
    Heyo July 3, 2020 2:54 am

    that means Shion would have been seen with the halo and wings

    Sushi July 4, 2020 1:33 am
    that means Shion would have been seen with the halo and wings Heyo

    they could have just pretended it was cosplay.