That was super rushed, not even enough time to develop an attachment to the dad before he's killed off. Doesn't really show what their relationship is like at all. Needs more exposition, I don't even know anything about the MC... They should at least slow him being a good guy and spending more time showing him being loyal by taking the expulsion from school in order to protect his shitty friends or something. A one line throw away doesn't really convey the same emotional impact.
That was super rushed, not even enough time to develop an attachment to the dad before he's killed off. Doesn't really show what their relationship is like at all. Needs more exposition, I don't even know anything about the MC... They should at least slow him being a good guy and spending more time showing him being loyal by taking the expulsion from school in order to protect his shitty friends or something. A one line throw away doesn't really convey the same emotional impact.