Perhaps I was expecting too much, but wasn't the ML pretty devoid of personality. He blew hot and cold, but there was never enough to give the reader the least idea of what he was thinking or where he was coming from. His being so devoid of character makes it difficult to see how the FL could fall in love with him at all. Even when being supposedly affectionate with the children, he seemed more like a stick figure.
Perhaps I was expecting too much, but wasn't the ML pretty devoid of personality. He blew hot and cold, but there was never enough to give the reader the least idea of what he was thinking or where he was coming from. His being so devoid of character makes it difficult to see how the FL could fall in love with him at all. Even when being supposedly affectionate with the children, he seemed more like a stick figure.