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"unseen threats" and it was a woman that acted like his lover and him being...
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Have reread and commenting again
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Dex and Maddie are destined to have an affair at one point if some event...
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Onpage 17 no one is driving the car and on page 102 why is she wearing sung...
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Ehh wasn’t that into this one. The ML pissed me off the whole time and the only time I really was satisfied was when I saw him cry lmao. Like ML gets annoyed at FL for “losing a single paper” and doesn’t like how she “puts the blame” on maddie. Later Maddie slips a letter into his suitcase and he lets it off like it was nothing. Oh and don’t forget that one line that made me irritated: “you’re important to me but I don’t love you” something like that.
The FL wasn’t that appealing either cause she still went with the flow and married the dude even when she knew that it wasn’t because he loved her. Her decisions weren’t really logical until she got heartbroken and was pushed to run away.
Seen a better one-shot with nice plot, great FL and ML from the same author. This one was something to just cure some boredom lol sorry not sorry