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I totally agree. This is super thorough criticism, on top of (for me at least) how neither of the two main characters ever became likeable enough for me to root for them.
thanks ^-^
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I totally agree. This is super thorough criticism, on top of (for me at least) how neither of the two main characters ever became likeable enough for me to root for them.
thanks ^-^
Overall I liked it but the pacing was so off in general, but especially towards the end. She never cleared things up with the blond girl, Eunsung's backstory never went anywhere so there was no catharsis so it kinda felt unnecessary even though it sorta makes up his whole personality. Dogyung segment was handled so badly it makes me cringe, the whole soju incident was so out of character for Sungeun too, also it was established in the initial chapters she could surprisingly hold her alcohol pretty well but suddenly Eunsung says she can't?? We never learned what went down between Eunsung and Dogyung in high school even though it felt pretty important and relevant to the main story. I could say a lot more honestly, cuz like a lot of shit was left hanging or done in a very sloppy way, but this makes it seem like I was mostly frustrated which wasn't it. It was mostly very enjoyable. It just kinda feels like the whole thing was written in a 3 am adrenaline rush to meet the deadline.