Things I did not realize while reading it the first time, but now by rereading it

Willien August 19, 2020 10:33 pm

I really did not like the behavior in the first two chapters of the uke regarding his little brother and the seme. Yeah, ok, you have a brother complex but being against it that bad, just made it homophobic to me. He also did not even let the seme explain himself and just assumed everything.
(Yeah he changes later on, but still)

The blackmailing part of the seme was also not great, but most of the time his actions have a logical and relatable reason behind them.

I can also clearly see, not to mention that it is pretty realistic, why the seme wanted to give up and did not want to chase the uke regarding his love.

Still a good story, I must say, it's just that the uke's action in the beginning bothered me a lot.

Responses
    Yana September 11, 2020 2:43 pm

    Regarding how he acted in the first few chapters I agree it was homophobic but aside from that I understand why he wouldnt want them to date
    His younger brother was 16-17 years old while Todou was 27. If I was the older brother Id be against it too considering Hokuto is a minor

    Willien September 11, 2020 2:48 pm
    Regarding how he acted in the first few chapters I agree it was homophobic but aside from that I understand why he wouldnt want them to dateHis younger brother was 16-17 years old while Todou was 27. If I was t... Yana

    I know, but it still didn't sit right with me ( ̄へ ̄)

    But I find him ok now, he went through changes