its quite okay its very plain in my honest opinion, and couldve been better if it focused on character development and the ups and downs of their relationship. for a boys love manga, there wasnt that much love. its cute, but there were lots of things that couldve been improved.
if anyone wants to hear my advice, this manga needs emphasis on : when the two MCs fell in love, when brown haired MC was going through heart break, how black haired MC’s personality changed, how the rumours affected their relationship, what actually happened to the girl spreading the gossip... basically the major plot points of this manga needs more of everything. thx for coming to my ted talk, i hope this helps out anyone like me who wants to make a manga in the future!!
its quite okay
its very plain in my honest opinion, and couldve been better if it focused on character development and the ups and downs of their relationship. for a boys love manga, there wasnt that much love. its cute, but there were lots of things that couldve been improved.
if anyone wants to hear my advice, this manga needs emphasis on :
when the two MCs fell in love, when brown haired MC was going through heart break, how black haired MC’s personality changed, how the rumours affected their relationship, what actually happened to the girl spreading the gossip... basically the major plot points of this manga needs more of everything.
thx for coming to my ted talk, i hope this helps out anyone like me who wants to make a manga in the future!!