My head hurts reading this, the plot is all over the place, the scenes are jumpy and incon...

brils October 2, 2020 4:20 am

My head hurts reading this, the plot is all over the place, the scenes are jumpy and inconclusive, the characters get distracted a lot, the main character doesn't even try to progress the story and just wait for the heroine to step in, some important details are not elaborated, and most of all, the writing is so bad I just skipped through without reading the text and just admire the nice art.

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    Ren October 3, 2020 6:24 am

    I feel like you can only be so clueless until your just considered a moron, cuz omfg this man is pissing me off. And yeah, I sense literally no progress unless it has something to do with the character development of the would-be villainess