um so since everyone’s ranting... i don’t particularly like the mc cause like- he- so you see... well he’s feeling awkward and disgusted about liking another man when he’s dated other men before like that’s just stupid. he’s like “stop wat are you thinking your a boy”. like he acts like he’s never been gay before- like... SIR. he’s doesn’t even try to stick with his principles- he was like “oh your pretty handsome so i’ll ignore the fact you killed a man and sent another to hell to save me-3-". Um again- SIRR. He’s lowkey a little cocky and he literally looks like he has a different art style compared to literally everyone else. don’t get me started on the ex too— jesus christ, a shit show. he dates, betrays, steals a song but has the audacity to still feel jealous when the mc shows up with another man. he also keeps getting mad at everyone for asking for more of ‘his’ music?! um chile anyway.. i had high hopes for the seme too. he comes in outta no where and expects this random ass guy he’s never talked to before to become his wife and gets mad when he’s out with friends or other men in general. he has no right, especially when it just seems like he’s using the uke a replacement.
but anyway this just isn’t my cup of tea. the characters had potential. i’ll respectfully stop reading the story now.
i just wanted to leave my opinion, but any future readers are totally free to read it too. we all have different tastes.
um so since everyone’s ranting... i don’t particularly like the mc cause like- he- so you see...
well he’s feeling awkward and disgusted about liking another man when he’s dated other men before like that’s just stupid. he’s like “stop wat are you thinking your a boy”. like he acts like he’s never been gay before- like... SIR. he’s doesn’t even try to stick with his principles- he was like “oh your pretty handsome so i’ll ignore the fact you killed a man and sent another to hell to save me-3-". Um again- SIRR. He’s lowkey a little cocky and he literally looks like he has a different art style compared to literally everyone else.
don’t get me started on the ex too— jesus christ, a shit show. he dates, betrays, steals a song but has the audacity to still feel jealous when the mc shows up with another man. he also keeps getting mad at everyone for asking for more of ‘his’ music?! um chile anyway..
i had high hopes for the seme too. he comes in outta no where and expects this random ass guy he’s never talked to before to become his wife and gets mad when he’s out with friends or other men in general. he has no right, especially when it just seems like he’s using the uke a replacement.
but anyway this just isn’t my cup of tea. the characters had potential. i’ll respectfully stop reading the story now.
i just wanted to leave my opinion, but any future readers are totally free to read it too. we all have different tastes.