I feel like I may have vaguely read this before when I was younger. And now that I'm older, I don't find the same stuff as interesting anymore. So honestly, to me, this story was just overly dramatic. Like literally, Fujisawa being all "I'm burying a corpse." And the characters talking in such a halting manner with lots of ellipses. Like is this a soap opera? Moment he said he's burying a corpse or being a gravekeeper or whatever I'm like ya okay dude, what kinda ridic thing are u actually burying and ur calling it a "heart?" When it's finally revealed, then sure it's got meaning to it. But all that build up for all those chapters and the characters being all vague and all "a corpseee a murderrrerrrr a GRAVE" like can you guys MAYBE chill out a little? Like yes, I understand death weighs upon people. But people don't magically start waxing poetic all the time after it happens like bruh. "THIS HOUSE IS A GRAVE AND I'M THE GRAVEKEEPER AND I SPEND ALL MY NIGHTS BURYING A HEART AND CORPSE CUZ IM A SINNNNERRRR." Talk like a human please. Like the story just sounds like it's tryna be mysterious and profound but it's like obvious writer's trying too hard. Honestly, I read through this all with "can we get to the point please." And MC being classic "I'm molested but...why can't I runnn?? He looks so lonelyyyyy" Idk how he really made any kinda change to Fujisawa, maybe he's just a touch less sensitive than Makoto or something idk even. Anyway, like I said, my tastes are different since I got older so who knows. I'm just not into melodrama.
I feel like I may have vaguely read this before when I was younger. And now that I'm older, I don't find the same stuff as interesting anymore. So honestly, to me, this story was just overly dramatic. Like literally, Fujisawa being all "I'm burying a corpse." And the characters talking in such a halting manner with lots of ellipses. Like is this a soap opera? Moment he said he's burying a corpse or being a gravekeeper or whatever I'm like ya okay dude, what kinda ridic thing are u actually burying and ur calling it a "heart?" When it's finally revealed, then sure it's got meaning to it. But all that build up for all those chapters and the characters being all vague and all "a corpseee a murderrrerrrr a GRAVE" like can you guys MAYBE chill out a little? Like yes, I understand death weighs upon people. But people don't magically start waxing poetic all the time after it happens like bruh. "THIS HOUSE IS A GRAVE AND I'M THE GRAVEKEEPER AND I SPEND ALL MY NIGHTS BURYING A HEART AND CORPSE CUZ IM A SINNNNERRRR." Talk like a human please. Like the story just sounds like it's tryna be mysterious and profound but it's like obvious writer's trying too hard. Honestly, I read through this all with "can we get to the point please." And MC being classic "I'm molested but...why can't I runnn?? He looks so lonelyyyyy" Idk how he really made any kinda change to Fujisawa, maybe he's just a touch less sensitive than Makoto or something idk even.
Anyway, like I said, my tastes are different since I got older so who knows. I'm just not into melodrama.