1. The story being dragged too much... Nera was in her own tranquil life. But she did this and that out of no where??? Like why now? Nera should rebel, try to kill MC and be dead/in jail while we still in "MC claimed her title" kinda arc. U know when the uncle and other vassal got punished and such. She should plan something to kill MC at that time and already defeated in this chapter timeline.. So we can focus on how the MC overthrown the 2nd Queen and the ML could be the true heir of the throne.
Yet the author decided the 'quiet Nera' need to rebel now(╯°Д °)╯╧╧
2. I remember the duke and duchess once said wanting to adopt a daughter. It will be more 'believeable' if Nera got adopted because a competition being held and she was the best at acting pure..
Yet the author decided the plot will be better with Nera suddenly being red-eyed girl, adopted, and no one in the right mind (except the MC) ever asking about how the eyes change colour..
and asking about her RED hair which neither the mom or the father had like um wtf!...i also wanted nera to have a redemption arc since she is also pregnant rn. but the author had to keep wanting to make nera to be the worst person there and had her call the fetus a monster or smth.
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The story being dragged too much...
Nera was in her own tranquil life. But she did this and that out of no where??? Like why now? Nera should rebel, try to kill MC and be dead/in jail while we still in "MC claimed her title" kinda arc. U know when the uncle and other vassal got punished and such.
She should plan something to kill MC at that time and already defeated in this chapter timeline.. So we can focus on how the MC overthrown the 2nd Queen and the ML could be the true heir of the throne.
Yet the author decided the 'quiet Nera' need to rebel now(╯°Д °)╯╧╧
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I remember the duke and duchess once said wanting to adopt a daughter. It will be more 'believeable' if Nera got adopted because a competition being held and she was the best at acting pure..
Yet the author decided the plot will be better with Nera suddenly being red-eyed girl, adopted, and no one in the right mind (except the MC) ever asking about how the eyes change colour..
And this is my last strain of patience.. (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜