my opinion

kyle December 14, 2020 6:42 pm

so i just completed this and i have a few things to say. don't get me wrong, this was really cute but there are some things that don't sit right with me. for starters, their relationship isn't all that healthy. the seme (i forgot his name) is too possessive. he got jealous whenever the uke (i also forgot his name) hung out with anyone else. also, before they were dating he would continuously make moves on the uke but then say stuff like "oh no im so sorry, you totally hate me right? im so terrible". secondly, he's so obsessed with the uke to the point he doesn't care about furthering his career. the ending just doesn't seem like a happy ending to me, none of the real problems were resolved.

but at the end of the day this is all just fiction so it doesn't really matter so please don't take what i said too seriously, haha.

Responses
    Iamzemuffinboi December 15, 2020 5:21 pm

    Oml thank you I agree! I was a little put off at times and these would b some ~red flags~ irl but I’m glad at least it was relatively harmless to their relationship ┗( T﹏T )┛

    Aera December 17, 2020 10:04 pm

    omg i totally agree with u