To me this webtoon has been written poorly but it was given a 9.6 so the problem must lie ...

Makio December 15, 2020 1:07 pm

To me this webtoon has been written poorly but it was given a 9.6 so the problem must lie with me. What is it that I’m not seeing? Normally Mangago is 99% right when it comes to their ratings so this webtoon must be good but It’s just not clicking with me

Responses
    Kras December 15, 2020 1:16 pm

    i think its pretty good, like not the best but not average

    maybe u just dont dig the art? its pretty different from other styles (i think its pretty though.) so the vibes u feel kinda off, i was like that after the first few

    but i dont think its "written poorly" thats not how i would describe the bad points to this

    Sofia December 15, 2020 1:22 pm

    Maybe it's the tranlation.It started off good but there are some chapters that are poorly translated so it could be that

    Defeated by Gravity December 15, 2020 1:52 pm

    First, don't believe any rating on mango. It's almost always wrong and the worst written manga will get top ratings.

    As far as writing structure, this is pretty good. The characterization is flat. But that's the rest is pretty good. What did you find bad about the writing?

    The popularity could be put down to the unique plot and drama, as well as Shuli being unfazable. She's a clever protagonist.

    It's also looking to be very unlikely that Shuli will end up with the prince, which is always a welcome change from standard isekai.

    Makio December 15, 2020 4:58 pm
    First, don't believe any rating on mango. It's almost always wrong and the worst written manga will get top ratings. As far as writing structure, this is pretty good. The characterization is flat. But that's th... Defeated by Gravity

    Someone above mentioned the translation being trash at the beginning and that might be it, idk. The art is good, maybe I don’t really understand what she’s trying to do? Or how she’s trying to live her life now

    Makio December 15, 2020 4:59 pm
    i think its pretty good, like not the best but not averagemaybe u just dont dig the art? its pretty different from other styles (i think its pretty though.) so the vibes u feel kinda off, i was like that after ... Kras

    I might have to read it again to see, maybe I just don’t understand her conquests or what she’s trying to achieve?? Lemme read it again

    Makio December 15, 2020 5:00 pm
    Maybe it's the tranlation.It started off good but there are some chapters that are poorly translated so it could be that Sofia

    That might be it, I’ll read it again because it just doesn’t bang for me

    Defeated by Gravity December 16, 2020 1:45 am
    Someone above mentioned the translation being trash at the beginning and that might be it, idk. The art is good, maybe I don’t really understand what she’s trying to do? Or how she’s trying to live her li... Makio

    Basically, Shuli's entire intention here is to be a proper mother and head of house. She's also trying to keep the fortune safe so she can pass it back to the kids when they reach adulthood. In her previous life, she did well with the finances but she had nothing to do with the kids. So when it was all over, she had no family.

    Tbh, I think Shuli would have been pretty happy in her original life. I don't think there was any reason why she would be more satisfied with her current one. She would have likely lived free and happy, starting from scratch. Fallen in love with someone, maybe had kids of her own.

    So I don't consider this the 'good' timeline. Just another timeline.

    Makio December 16, 2020 4:06 am
    Basically, Shuli's entire intention here is to be a proper mother and head of house. She's also trying to keep the fortune safe so she can pass it back to the kids when they reach adulthood. In her previous lif... Defeated by Gravity

    Yeah that might be it, I don’t agree with the way she’s living this current timeline, but that’s just me I guess, thanks for breaking that down!

    Defeated by Gravity December 16, 2020 2:10 pm
    Yeah that might be it, I don’t agree with the way she’s living this current timeline, but that’s just me I guess, thanks for breaking that down! Makio

    Shuli is at least understandable. The person I don't understand is the weird old asshole who decided a child would make a good mother. Was he just a pedo and didn't live long enough to molest her?