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The mangaka had an idea for a story and never followed through with it. The...
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hmmm. I wish it has more well paced and delivered story, I mean, it seemed ...
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I thought I'm alone on this....
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this was ridiculous! the characters reacted in the most unnatural way. They...
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...shitty delivery. The plot concept has incredible potential, but the writing was unfocused, confusing at times and rushed. The characters seem to have been developed hastily and, although I read yaoi for the sex, in this case, it seemed to get in the characters' way. There was no smooth transition or reason for most of the encounters and only two encounters moved either the plot forward, or character growth. In short, it felt like the mangaka took a great seinen manga and shoe-horned a bunch of sex scenes into it. Neither fit the others story line.
That said, the sex scenes were okay (what was shown) and I enjoyed them, if I ignored the plot. Conversely, if I ignored the sex, the plot was enjoyable. I think the mangaka should have just picked a genre for this story and stuck with it. IMHO