in what kind of way good sir. im ready for the spoils, this shit never updates anyway
okay this is going to be a long one so buckle up. So the story is actually relatively short, about 48 chapters if I remember correctly. That in itself is not a problem, the thing is, there’s like no character development whatsoever. The only person that sort of changes is the protagonist, but both semes (i already forgot their names lmao) stay the same throughout the story, they start being crazy weirdos who like the protagonist for no reason at all and they end by being crazy weirdos who like the protagonist because he looks cute when he cries?? (debatable i personally think he looks kinda ugly lol). And we also never really learn anything about where the characters come from, why do they act the way they do, how did they use to live before everything went down, etc.
Also if you like romance stories this is not for you at all because all they do is have sex, they never even talk about their feelings like at all.
Another thing is that there are a bunch of extra characters that are sprinkled throughout the story whose only purpose is to die tbh, like they are presented and then they die or disappear literally two chapters later, while the two semes are like indestructible or something fr.
At the end of the series, there’s a Q&A with the author and they reveal so much information that I think could have made the story much better and the characters so much more complex. In the author’s defence tho, this was their first comic ever made, so it was nice for a first attempt but it’s still not a very good story.
Oh, and the end is kinda wack immo
ngl your commentary made me lmao. but shit man, those tiny things you pointed out rlly matter. thx for the explanation though. I was not even expecting a reply, rather than a whole ass paragraph
do you have the Spanish raws?? I wanna translate it
please do good sir, i rlly want to read this
i just finished reading the Spanish version and i just want to say i’m quiet disappointed lol