... had me asking, "What the hell did I just read?" Chapter 3 was as like watching a monkey f*ck a football - utterly ridiculous. The plot was... wait, was there a plot? The rest of the chapters were better written, but still not up to par with the main story. The kid having sex, or trying to, with his uncle - had the stupidest resolution since the "vision sequence" in Breaking Dawn Pt. 2. In short, the first two chapters deserved more of the mangaka's effort to finish. The rest should have been burned at the manuscript stage, so the time and energy could have been put toward the main story.
... had me asking, "What the hell did I just read?" Chapter 3 was as like watching a monkey f*ck a football - utterly ridiculous. The plot was... wait, was there a plot? The rest of the chapters were better written, but still not up to par with the main story. The kid having sex, or trying to, with his uncle - had the stupidest resolution since the "vision sequence" in Breaking Dawn Pt. 2. In short, the first two chapters deserved more of the mangaka's effort to finish. The rest should have been burned at the manuscript stage, so the time and energy could have been put toward the main story.