Good, but I'm always put off when a character has an issue that seems to be glossed over. With the Uke, he clearly has been treated like shit for a long time, and he clearly is made a victim. Also if someone is doing welling in one department don't move them to another one where they don't know what the hell to do. It's like telling a butcher to frost a wedding cake. The Seme was very nice. Loving, passionate. Well done. But with the Uke, it kind of came out of no where when he somewhat stood up to that jerk that kept talking to him like he was shit. Really there was no development to bring him that anger.
Good, but I'm always put off when a character has an issue that seems to be glossed over. With the Uke, he clearly has been treated like shit for a long time, and he clearly is made a victim. Also if someone is doing welling in one department don't move them to another one where they don't know what the hell to do. It's like telling a butcher to frost a wedding cake.
The Seme was very nice. Loving, passionate. Well done.
But with the Uke, it kind of came out of no where when he somewhat stood up to that jerk that kept talking to him like he was shit. Really there was no development to bring him that anger.