For the second couple in chapter 3 i feel like this is too cliche yk.
"Im doing it for a childhood friend who's face ive forgotten"
"Oh wait it cant be.... youre the childhood friend???"
I feel like it would be more imteresting and a bit different if the childhood friend was actually another person. Like he was really doing it for someone else... just an idea Anyways i didnt hate it i really liked the couple and it was just a bit predictable for me but yeah
If anyone can recommend me something like this please do ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
For the second couple in chapter 3 i feel like this is too cliche yk.
"Im doing it for a childhood friend who's face ive forgotten"
"Oh wait it cant be.... youre the childhood friend???"
I feel like it would be more imteresting and a bit different if the childhood friend was actually another person. Like he was really doing it for someone else... just an idea
Anyways i didnt hate it i really liked the couple and it was just a bit predictable for me but yeah
If anyone can recommend me something like this please do ლ(´ڡ`ლ)