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he should've treasured the mc's feelings first if he truly loves her, he was kind of insensitive towards what mc would feel that's why he doesn't deserve her
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he should've treasured the mc's feelings first if he truly loves her, he was kind of insensitive towards what mc would feel that's why he doesn't deserve her
I like it and it seems cool my problem is... how does the plot move forward once she gets the harem? Like, she's only really doing it as a power move. She doesn't really seem to WANT them. And there isn't a real antagonist.
Her ex isn't evil or anything. He's just has unrealistic expectations. It looks like he really thought he could get her to wait a total of 7 years(2 for his war & 5 for his marriage) with the power of love. He doesn't seem spiteful or anything. It looks like he really thought he could just wait it out and sail into the sunset. I mean, the girl is royalty. She has so many other options. Why did he think she would wait longer than they spent together? Stupid but not malicious.
I gotta admit, that takes away from the whole revenge plot.