
Story could solely focus on Will and whatever is happening with him and not just throw this stupid 'cheating' subplot with Juda and Daath that adds nothing and it's not even a conflict cause we already know how this ends.
This honestly subtracts to the story instead of adding.
Also and most importantly, the sex scenes suffer. Why even?

True, you are absolutely right, but this is still based on them and how they get through these obstacles, I’m completely here for it. Also, there could still be some people that have not read the sequel yet and are enjoying the story as is, but I agree, the “cheating” trope out of everything is kind of over the top.
Oh man, the absolute suspense I wonder if Daath is gonna cheat or get married and have twins and be happy forever like it sucks not to know....
(what a stupid conflict to introduce when we already know Juda and Daath are super in love and happy in the future)