I see alot of you don't like it because of the age gap but I think the age difference is r...

Darkmoon January 18, 2021 5:42 am

I see alot of you don't like it because of the age gap but I think the age difference is reasonable , they were both kids when they first met she was 5 and he was 12 or 15 or something i think they are close in age , a 10 year gap is ok for the time set of the story . What is strange for me is they let thier butler do this sex training to her it's just doesn't make sense to me !! Why let another man take her virginity under the name of training !! Other then that stupid training thing i like the story and the art and i hope they end up happily together

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    TheUnwritten January 18, 2021 8:24 pm

    Yeah, you are right, the art is amazing! However, the problem isn't their age gap. The problem is that he basically raised her, and it keeps cutting back to scenes when she is a child while he is lusting after her. She is still a child and is engaged to another man. Despite this, I believe they are in love with each other. However, the main issue at hand is CONSENT. I mean the basic pretense of the training and him just going down on her by ripping her clothes off is rape-y. He didn't ask, but said her father assigned him to her and that she needs "training." When really it's because he hasn't gotten over his feelings for her, and she is about to be taken away from him. She has no obligation to give him that because he loves her or because she loves him. She did not voice consent neither did he ask for her consent PERIOD. He is repetitively doing it to her without regards to her feelings by treating her like a child mentally but as a woman physically. He gets off to it. I am sorry to say, even though the art is amazing, he is still sexually assaulting a child/young woman who is engaged to another. She is engaged! Whether you believe that is right or wrong does not matter as in this time period, it was normal for 16+ girls (coming of age) to be engaged as this was determined by the man of the household. SO screw patriarchy, but this does not give him the right to assault her. Therefore, the plot is crap. Sorry not sorry for the rant. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    Lolikiano February 2, 2021 6:55 pm
    Yeah, you are right, the art is amazing! However, the problem isn't their age gap. The problem is that he basically raised her, and it keeps cutting back to scenes when she is a child while he is lusting after ... TheUnwritten

    EXACTLY you said everything I wanted to say but better

    Starsandmetaphors February 2, 2021 8:24 pm

    I'm so confused about the sex training. Like apparently just explaining how sex works with drawings was too advanced logic for the people in this story lmao