Okay...

nat246 January 24, 2021 6:34 am

3 chapters in so far and some thoughts...
First of all.. the plot has me asking WHAT IS GOING ON!???? Every two minutes.
Secondly. Holy shit he IS LARGE. He is a big boy would climb like tree. But seriously plot??? What's HAPPENING. Looks like some weird magic sex thing.
ALSO...Bitch close your shirt??? No reason to be walking around the forest with that much cleavage. Think of the mosquitoes. Disgusting

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    nat246 January 24, 2021 6:50 am

    By chapter 7 not much has cleared up. The giant bear of a man being an innocent was a surprise.