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Honestly, I won't be reading this story but why is people shitting on the art? They said it was their first time. Sure it's not as refined and pleasant looking like the art that we see around here but y'all have to remember that manga, manhwa, and manhua artists also has to start like this. They didn't magically perfected their art when they just started to draw. Practice is what made them improved. Let people do their shit and if y'all don't have anything good to say, shut the fuck up.