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it's kind of.....lacking. I think the topic of miscarriage wasn't tackled very well and i really wanted to see how they progress from that depressing event in their lives. Sure, they did show it, but i was flabbergasted that hr was pregnant again after a few chapters. I wanted to know what they did before the timeskip. Did they talk about getting pregnant again? Like, i want to see how they planned it this time. It would be more wholesome to see that.