
I got only a couple panels into chapter 1 and I can already tell this is gonna be shit, also the other comments saying that it is, tells me I was right. This is NOT how you write a story, you've thrown us into a plot that we don't understand, and we don't know. Sometimes authors can get away with this, and it actually makes the story better, but this was horribly executed, and I hope the author decides to actually learn how to correctly write, instead of spinning their thumbs around, making bullshit.
You guys ever read a straight Manga and you can just tell off the bat that a male who's never even touched or talked to a woman wrote it..that's how I feel about a lot of the straight Manga smut on here..
Oh please... Every damn straight hentai/smut manga out there always depict females as the horny one and wants sex all the time. And the man in the manga is just standing there and somehow gets to bang one/multiple females. It's getting repetitive and honestly the only thing that separates them is which art is better.
It shows that the author expect women to come at them horny #-.-)
Whenever I see a sex scene within water, I come to the conclusion that the author most likely has either never had sex, or is just following some dumb trend.
Having sex in water is fucking painful..