beta
maybe it’s just me but…this story was very simple? and often at times really rigid. while i didn’t know the plot twist before hand it wasn’t really shocking bc of the nature of the character…like who really believed he loved him?!?? and i feel the story was so flat i didn’t really care of the outcomes and other characters…like why should i care about the sisters stalker when we’ve barely developed that plot it just seemed unnecessary
overall i wish i didn’t see the comments labeling this a masterpiece bc it feels far from that