This don't really feels like subverse, is messy, all over the place and is more about sex than commands, and there's not even tension building, so not even the smut feels good
Top is so fucking annoying, he can't smoke, can't touch, can't hug, can't talk, he gives his ass being an alpha and date you and you just keep whining and don't speak up or explain things, you know what yeah you don't deserve him
Not the cherry literally popping lmao I NEED MORE RIGHT NOW I KEEP REREADING IT CUZ I DON'T WANT IT TO END UGH in the best part.... another week... im dying
No way his name is really pureum sounds wrong
Sounds like perineum hahaha