It feels a bit incomplete, lacking, and rushed(?). The 2nd couple's story just went on too fast and we didnt get to see Jangmi and the other guy's conclusion like they just left those characters.
Its a good story, but if it was longer it might've been better.
PLS I JUST HAVE TO COMMENT
BRO LOOKS LIKE ARATAKA REIGEN FROM MOB PSYCHO （/TДT)/
DUDE I HAD THE SAME THOUGHT
SAME! I just reread this and noticed it this time. I must not have watched Mob when I read this first time BECAUSE YOU CANNOT MISS HOW SIMILAR THEY LOOK OMG!
Everything is sooo rushed! There are still a lot of questions that aren't answered. Plus, I wouldve loved to see the other supposed targets(no incest), SPECIFICALLY Siren! I rooted for Ilya from the start but I really wished we couldve seen the others growth too :((
We dont even know much about our mc and the system's history. And why Ilya can sense and see it, yes its magic but why does Ilya feel VERY indifferent about it? Yeah the mana that he feels is not from Jerry, so he gets kinda jealous but why? Why is the mana different? and the fortune guy!! Who the hell was he!!
AND SIREN!!! I NEED MORE SIREN PLEASE!!!
LIKE PLEASEEEEEEEE
I NEED MY QUESTIONS ANSWERED (and Siren) (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Midori T-T
AO-KUN??? WHERE THE F@CK ARE YOU