I’ve got nothing against the kid, but it would’ve been better if the author hadn’t made that plot for the two of them, because now I can’t really see how the son fits into everything.
It would’ve already been great if they had just spent one night together in the past, had a few memories, and then ended up meeting again like things are now.
When his son gets introduced into the main story, it’s going to feel kind of confusing and disconnected — not to mention that Chase is almost as much of a kid as the boy. And like, Josh’s story doesn’t make sense to me: “Years ago, I had a kid after a crazy night with this jerk, let years go by without telling him, and now I’m his bodyguard and getting romantically involved without thinking about anything else.”
I’ve got nothing against the kid, but it would’ve been better if the author hadn’t made that plot for the two of them, because now I can’t really see how the son fits into everything.
It would’ve already been great if they had just spent one night together in the past, had a few memories, and then ended up meeting again like things are now.
When his son gets introduced into the main story, it’s going to feel kind of confusing and disconnected — not to mention that Chase is almost as much of a kid as the boy. And like, Josh’s story doesn’t make sense to me: “Years ago, I had a kid after a crazy night with this jerk, let years go by without telling him, and now I’m his bodyguard and getting romantically involved without thinking about anything else.”
Umm cause of his kid Josh stopped being a manwhore and devoted his time to raising the kid LOL