beta
imo the lengths of the chapters considering updates take days apart, the story build up is kind of being deminished. the chapters are too short for a maximized impact thrill-wise and retention-wise. I'd rather wait for longer days in-between so long as the chapters are longer for better plot and thrill retention.
the plot is sooo good and well-thought but because it's so short and the chapters are far apart it almost seems like it's all over the place (it's not)
but then again who am I to complain, I'm pirating lol