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Im sorry but ch 1-31(where ive reached) is such SHIT. IT AINT REALLY THAT DEEP GIRLY. She is legitimate so fucking stupid an weak. You pretend to be strong willed when d prince wasn't there in yuh lil village, but wwhen he comes with the saint and causes a scene you quaking in yuh pants.
Okay. If you think that XYZ will be swept away by the saint in the novel WHY THIS RATS ASS WOULD YOU GET CLOSE TO THEM. WHY DO *YOU* CARE ABOUT WHAT THE SAINT SAY ABOUT XYZ?? SHE WILLINGLY CHOSE TO GET CLOSE TO THE MAN THAT SHE KNOWS IN THE NOVEL GETS INNA THREE-WAY W THE PRINCE AND SAINT.
Not only that, she is SHIT at running her territory. I was hoping that this novel would give me some ideas for my novel that im writing but this is hot shit. All i saw was her letting d assistant dude use her personal fund to do something. Not only that if she knew that there was a threat of monsters, why DIDN'T she move the residences in the north and south(i think) into the main village because a SHIT TON of people died because the miasma was creeping on them.
I'm here think oh, this gon an ve useful to my story cus my plot points are similar. Mc gets transmigrated into a spoilt girl and has to manage a small village that is literally on the edge of a forest filled with monsters. I want my mc to ACTUALLY BE INVOLVED with many of the village's needs.
Fuck this story and fuck the mc. Maybe if you stop bitching and moaning over man you'll actually be sound of mind without having to worry over the know possibilities. Stop worrying about the ifs because at the end of the day, you have a territory to run and many people's lives are in your hands. Smh Mc has such loser vibes.