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ok, just read the last few chapters (skipped all the way to chapter 10, couldnt do it anymore) and it is even WORSE. oh my god. "why are you so cruel only to me?" FREE MY GIRL, GET AWAY FROM HER YOU FREAK, SHE DOESNT LIKE YOU. i fucking HATE his attitude, acting like everything he says is a fact and pretty much blatantly saying her feelings are irrelevant because "we love each other." excuse me??? "i will give you everything you desire" except youve gotten angry with her every time shes said what she wanted??? fuck you. let her go back to artemis, let her atone and be punished. she would literally rather fucking die than be with you dawg