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I'm only halfway through the chapters but the forced misunderstandings are lowkey getting to me. Mc is aware his actions could get misunderstood so he tries to explain but then proceeds to not explain anything at all. He apologizes but doesn't elaborate why he's apologizing. Vague dialogues that may have double meanings to create misunderstandings are okay, but to use it EVERY time they interact is just annoying and forced, I'm sorry. And yet, despite all that, their dynamics is still somehow so lackluster. No tension, no nothing.
The seme is so unlikeable. I’ve seen boring but somewhat decent semes and fucked up but interesting semes. How is he both boring AND unlikeable? This pisses me off so much, I’m gonna put this on my want to read list for now only because I like the art.