i love all the little notes you leave :D and the manga is so silly i love it
takami has no fucking idea that most of the things hes confused by is because of rin more than hatocchi
i tried to do these chapters on my own at some point last summer bc i am a huge suzuri machi fan and i failed miserably. you did great!!! thank you so much <3
i kind of hate that kyo cheated on eri. absolutely an awful thing for him to do, but there was also no evidence prior that would show him to be the kind of person who would do that? i understand that he isnt fit for eri at all, but i really liked his character and i thought him being a genuinely caring and good person made the conflict so much more interesting... making him cheat feels like the author is kicking him out in such a weak way :/
tokisaka showed up and its been a while so i dont remember all of the exact details of this entire manga but i literally said "who the hell even are you"