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the actual story is fun, a girl who maybe was overwhelmed by her boyfriends affection for her ends up breaking up with him, but because they didn’t fall out of love still hook up with each other, is fun in theory. The problem is that the pacing is so weird, we are just jumping around and i think some people say it’s the translations but honestly i think it’s just how the story is. One minute mc and her ex are talking then it cuts to them having sex, then we’re back in her home talking to her childhood friend, then we’re back in school. The longest segments are the sex scenes and everything else is like 3 frames as most.