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I arrived at chapter 18, it’d be an euphemism to say that my heart hurts, poor soul…
I don’t get why they keep saying that she’s not innocent, as if she wasn’t just a young girl loved by her family and living her passion. She’s paying for her father’s bad deeds, she’s lost everything… when there’re panels with shellfishes I just want to cry.
I still don’t get what ML has against her. I’m waiting for his backstory. He should’ve been really traumatized to be a fucking son of a bitch with the FL… I want to understand. They’ve met before but something happened and we don’t know what… can’t wait to know !
Anyways, I’m pretty satisfied with the angst. I’ve been searching for this kind of after WIMTBY & WYWD (since people keep comparing…..). My heart hurts when I’m reading and I just hope this will be a happy end for our girl.
For now I think it’s well-written. As I said, I’m waiting for the reasons of ML’s hatred. Looking forward to the next chapters !