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After all these years I have three critiques 1.) it kinda sucks that the author gave more lore concerning both Muyeong and Junseok’s background and development but didn’t really give any to Seonho his only lore is that he’s a comic writer but we don’t know anything about his family or anything else. Wish they would’ve gone through a whole point where we learned how he gravitated towards art and more about his issues with his previous relationships etc… and 2.) they randomly gave us this small lore drop about how Muyeong has always been a fan of Seonho but they hardly elaborated on it at all after that first time in the beginning and then they just dropped the reveal so it wasn’t even exciting. I wish they would’ve gone into Seonho’s struggles as an artist and how because of it he doesn’t have a lot of friends either etc…
3.) the grandmother was hella petty and her presence didn’t really end up adding much to the story other than her actions resulting in Muyeong moving in with Seonho.
I really like the story but I feel like it didn’t reach its full potential
I was literally reading manga to pass the time because a client was an hour and twenty minutes late and here goes mangago deciding not to work smh
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