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I have read my fair share of toxic yaois, along with love triangles, this in a way was bad and good? It had some good and bad stuff. It felt really rushed, some of the scenes were just not it the way they hold the guns and the fighting scenes make me giggle. The plot is very straightforward and there were some scenes that made me go “ok damn that’s crazy” but it is the plot that makes it feel really rushed.
The plot is mainly the reason why it feels rushed. I feel like it’s just going too quick, and we missed some amazing character development. For example, the MC changed so much after he was saved by Rohan, we could have been shown at least a few scenes of is development but we got nothing. I kinda hoped they would make their childhood flashbacks a bit longer, but it’s fine. Sometimes the flashbacks don’t have to be that important , and that’s the case with this yaoi. This mainly focuses on the present and not the past.
Again, the poses… oh my gosh, don’t get me started. The poses made me laugh so hard. The way they hold their guns is not it. I understand it’s cool to hold a gun with one hand but can’t you make the scene a bit more pleasing or satisfactory? The scene where Rohan came in to save MC from almost getting raped by the dudes that found him in the river, the way he held the gun was funny. He was just standing there like this