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It was a really good story
From the beginning I felt the dread, I felt the weirdness from Todd. The animals never liked him. He never seemed "Human" to me. From the onset what kinda answer is " I came from over the cliff" or whatever he said. Over the cliff ? There's nothing there. And to hunt? To Hunt what? The rarely seen deer? Or the sheep. Cus he made it clear he didn't like fish.
So imo Todd wasn't human, I believe he was that coyote that came to hunt from over the cliff....get it? Or! He's an evil cliff spirit or just a dead AF boy who torments people.
I thought our fine ass Mister here was delulu and hallucinating but the other man kinda confirmed he wasn't. Shouldn't have killed himself tho.
I personally wouldn't follow something creepy like that especially if I'll die. Fuck those promises. If I'm dead I wouldn't be able to fulfill them anyways. Thanks. BYE