beta
I agree with what everyone is saying but.. idk why but this story actually stayed with me a few days. Usually I'd just forget a random bl but this one kept popping up in my head. I think it's because the story had such potential and the art is gorgeous (honestly one of the hottest tops I've seen..). I'm not sure why the author had to rush it so much, because if they didn't and really explored more of the dungeons and relationship between them then this could have been something really great.