
Every chapter Im like. I'll hold out for plot.
But tbh what plot. It's sex sex sex, almost every chapter. I'm not against sex in comics, I read this genre, but like. Plot? Story? Something please. You offer an interesting concept at the start that grabs my interest, then you slip the carpet beneath my feet. Like come on...
Especially with the way it started, with how it is now? Day to day, learning how to write.. man