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But literally a love grenade with shrapnel flying in every direction.
Honestly, it was very interesting though full of holes, just like any Isekai actually.
The BL part of the story failed. The only relationship that worked and felt natural was between the girls, but the boys...
At least Kael, it felt like bullshit and it also felt like the author was conscious of it seeing how they justified it being the game's mechanics.
Objectively: the boy fell on his butt and in love lol.
No reason, no development, no credibility, he just fell on his butt then in love.
The beastman felt somewhat more realistic but a bit rushed, there was a reason for the gratitude, respect and devotion, but there was not enough time nor interactions to fall in love.
Carsen on the other hand had a history with the MC and a fair load of reasons to be obsessed with him. Does it justify the sexual assault though? Nope. There was literally no reason for it to be here aside from satisfying a small part of the audience.
The MC reactions are hilarious and felt way more realistic than most, I liked that.
My autocorrect just refuses their names lol I'm having a hard time writing all this.
Anyway, the plot was good, it was interesting and a lot happened, there was no time to get bored.
But the whole Isekai thing... How MC dreamt of the game (because in the end it was just a dream since his sister had no memories at all) and how the game characters kind of escaped the game and the dream to go in the real world was... Nnnngh, forced to randomly draw a happy ending. It was teased since the beginning and somehow explained with the fate stone but my suspension of disbelief couldn't take any more.
Oh and the bad guy was really forgettable.
The art improved A LOT!
In conclusion , it wasn't fabulous but it wasn't bad a all.