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Is this finished?
Nobody's gonna explain the gift and love letter in his locker?
Why was it even in the story?
And the bff rollercoaster love life, same, it just ends in the middle of the fight with his boyfriend because he's not the protagonist so no one cares?
Why is it in the story then?
And the woman lookalike, it's just... There... For nothing?
Whyyyyyy is it in the booooooook theeeen?
And the sister's misunderstanding about the MC's sex, did that also fall in a hole of the plot?
WHY WAS IT IN HERE THEN!
Seriously did Dory write this story?
It's bad, it's empty af and everything is unfinished.
Also why do they look and act like they're 12... And where TF are all these kids parents ffs !?!
There's nothing for me in here.
I'm sure there's an audience for this, but it's not me.