I'm surprised this has such a high rating. Storyline is poorly written, dialogue is even worse and the smut doesnt even save it imo. I kept waiting for it to get better since everyone in the comments seemed to enjoy it but it only got more boring :(
i agree with this, it has so much potential in the beginning and they could’ve delved deeper into the character’s background. like how they chose the uke as the surrogate, why they tolerate the seme being violent around his family, and that kind of stuff. also feel like they just randomly add omegaverse so they can add a baby TvT
It wasn't the best but it wasn't bad either. Despite there being some heavier topics at the beg, this was more of a chill story where you knew the good guys would win regardless. Good read for when you don't really have anything else.
OMG THANK GOD! I'm really praying this stays up but in the mean time, imma take note of my huge lists so that I'm not lost again! Hopefully I won't need them tho.
I'm surprised this has such a high rating. Storyline is poorly written, dialogue is even worse and the smut doesnt even save it imo. I kept waiting for it to get better since everyone in the comments seemed to enjoy it but it only got more boring :(
i agree with this, it has so much potential in the beginning and they could’ve delved deeper into the character’s background. like how they chose the uke as the surrogate, why they tolerate the seme being violent around his family, and that kind of stuff. also feel like they just randomly add omegaverse so they can add a baby TvT