
I'm surprised this has such a high rating. Storyline is poorly written, dialogue is even worse and the smut doesnt even save it imo. I kept waiting for it to get better since everyone in the comments seemed to enjoy it but it only got more boring :(

i agree with this, it has so much potential in the beginning and they could’ve delved deeper into the character’s background. like how they chose the uke as the surrogate, why they tolerate the seme being violent around his family, and that kind of stuff. also feel like they just randomly add omegaverse so they can add a baby TvT

It was good, but the pacing throughout felt a bit off to me. It started strong, then felt like it was dragging, and then it all of a sudden ended. But other than that, I thoroughly enjoyed this one. It's refreshing that a FL that's introduced as being independent and strong actually stays that way throughout the story
Well that's a lil sus. Listen I'm fine with age gaps but only when the two parties are well into adulthood when they first meet (like a 30yo with a 40yo) otherwise it just gives pedo