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So i personally don't mind fucked up stories. But i feel like the execution and the reasoning of this story just doesn't land. My favorite bl has to be "A painter behind the curtain" where the ML Raymon is such a detestable man for hurting others (especially Ian the MC) for his own gain. But for some reason... it fucking works. That's why i may hate him but i do love his characterization. His plots and action lead to so much dynamic to the story it was incredible. And the reason why he has to do what he has to do felt so valid coz literally his family was on top but some pesky noble just went and fuck up good people which was Raymon's family. I can't help but somehow emphatize his desperation on seeking vengence more than any other bl character i've ever read.
Enough the glazing, so does the MC's actions justify what has happen to him, his daughter and his actions???? NO... coz:
1) Bro got isekaied, what happened to the villainess shouldnt really emotionally impact him into protecting her coz... THAT'S TECHNICALLY NOT HIS DAUGHTER. Like i dont think u formed a proper bond over what u considered a fictional character when u read about this novel like come on -_-
2) Bruh the real perpetrator in this shinanigans is that stupid ass prince, not the girls. The girl saintess or whatever just happen to be spoil and got the attention of the guy who did the villainess wrong. And from what i heard in spoilers all this bitchass prince get is the shame of picking his girl wrong while the ones who indirectly caused this shit got more shit than this man. Like why doesnt the prince get fucked by dogs or the shit the girls get as well?
3) Why the guy so evil as i mention THIS MAN JUST GOT ISEKAIED. Like bro yes u are part of this shit coz u transmigrated to that fictional character but damn bro its so non-sensical that ur actions are to this extent coz THAT ISNT EVEN YOU. U know what im saying?
Like the fuck up-ness of this story just doesn't equate to the reason why the MC has to defend his daughter. It just leaves an icky feeling in a bad way icky. And yes many of yall say he's evil coz he's evil but man him being a 3rd party in this story just really doesn't make sense why he does that but maybe the original material being a novel into the manga didn't make the story as rich as it should be???? Idk i dont plan to really read the novel to bother if the writing their is better executed than in here ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Another story i love which is killing stalking (not bl but bare with me) is just fucked up but in the best way possible imo. The writing, characterization, intentions, are so on point that i see why the Sangwoo, Bum and story is so messed up is sooooo justified and makes so much sense. Unlike this one.
If yall enjoy villain stories coz of the sport of it, then this is def your cup of tea. But as for me... im still gonna read but that's just me to criticize it in silence LMAO. I will just say this is my personal taste ok? That's my 2 cents hope yall enjoy reading this one anyways (=・ω・=)